Jen this is that flower I mentioned in that comment:
Name: Daisy the Flower
Job: to wake the family in the house next to her field with pretty songs in the morning
Likes/Dislikes: likes to sing/doesn’t like to be alone
Fear: too different and won’t ever be accepted and loved
Problem: She’s the only flower in the field made of many colors and so the other flowers don’t like her because she is different
Secret: she is really a sunflower but doesn’t look like one
Comment: This is an example of a cohesive character that would make a good story. It has great colors and an interesting face, and her back-of-the-page information is cohesive and therefore interesting. I would base the story on her problem – being different – which is a problem from which many if not most secondary school kids suffer.
Predicted Score: 10/10
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