Allison Steps Up with a Video 1

This is a repost from last year. Allison would love some more feedback. She may be new at this but she sure takes the three structures and gets a story going with ease in this first of six short clips that we can all comment on. Here is the link and pls. tell her what you see:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yqTp6iUd31o