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Editing Request 2
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2 thoughts on “Editing Request 2”
Hey Ben,
There is a piece that you have in your book that starts with YOU – the teacher… I love how you describe that in writing, how you build suspense and add humor…. You then go into what you do, cycling… I noticed that it is not above or in the description that is included on your website. I really think that piece is helpful. Just my 2 centavos.
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Yeah I left it out for simplicity but you are right. And do you remember when I worked with Anne’s Hogs up there in Maine a few years ago and brought myself in as a bad dancer so that the girl who danced could shine, and how that whole thing worked to get her (fairly shy as I remember) up and dancing and how much fun that was? She never would have stood up had I not made a total ass out of myself comparing myself as a dancer to her. Yeah, I need to remember to do that but in this case there is no room left in the program – 2 pp. max.
P.S. Dude here we are talking on the weekend, and on Mother’s Day yet. Just pointing that out to you before you point it out to me. But I think it is bc we are now in that big rush at the end of the year. I am determined to learn to not get on here on the weekends like we decided, but this weekend just seems to be an exception.